Not to continue criticizing about your current style, but here is another example of where your linework didn't overpower the rest of the art to the point where it looks like something out of a coloring book. I really love the mix of line-weights, color sections, and shading with this one.
This will be my last comment on this subject.
Os lábios verdes deram mais personalidade ao uniforme!!
Vou aplicar isso quando atualizar o cosplay dela!!